小雪，冷

默寒

又是二十四节小雪后，昨夜醉眠，不问窗外有何事。其实薄雾小雨下不停，风扫枯柳天鹅湖。           披衾懒撩绣帘观外景，一地落枫，枝秃不见鹧鸪啭。原来西比利亚冬已至，凉穿瘦骨轻弄衣。

门墩儿

挺有意境的！

苍梧听风

引用楼主默寒于2011-11-30 12:27发表的 小雪，冷 :
又是二十四节小雪后，昨夜醉眠，不问窗外有何事。其实薄雾小雨下不停，风扫枯柳天鹅湖。           披衾懒撩绣帘观外景，一地落枫，枝秃不见鹧鸪啭。原来西比利亚冬已至，凉穿瘦骨轻弄衣。

诗词还是要押韵的。
楼主这是填的什么词牌呀？

默寒

I am just a university student ,not a professional,I just want to express my mind and thoughts.再说，时代在发展，太多的押韵和格律只会束缚人的思想，只能求得一些形式美，最重要的是内涵与情感

苍梧听风

引用第3楼默寒于2011-11-30 14:46发表的  :
I am just a university student ,not a professional,I just want to express my mind and thoughts.再说，时代在发展，太多的押韵和格律只会束缚人的思想，只能求得一些形式美，最重要的是内涵与情感

No matter what the identity of the person you are, here are the poet friends.

While classical poetry words reduced to the edge from the center, but it is not dead; not only did not die, but also show the resurgence of the weather from time to time. Not to mention that Lu Xun, Mao Zedong is a master of words to write classical poetry, even poetry was the new rage of the people who heard more than one person, I look back after the passage of time, also issued a "Tang Yin-breaking three thousand paper read, Lema back to the reins for the old-style poetry, "the vows. The two face seemingly paradoxical, is not contradictory. To the evolution of logic and poetry of view, the word Xing surviving poetry, song words surviving Xing; of poetry and classical poetry before and after the replacement of the word should be used for this concept, between the two can go hand in hand.

游戏需要规则。楼主的自由诗，建议发在现代诗歌版。